月餅盒換雞蛋英語作文題目來源

篇一：how to polish up your writing導學案

How to polish up your writing?如何潤色/提高你的作文

Ⅰ: Compare the following writing and give your opinions：Which one do you think attracts the teachers?

我們學校(嶽陽縣三中)位於新墻，它就像一座花園，滿園皆是美麗的花朵，青草綠樹，鳥兒吟唱於其間。

1. Our school is Yueyang County No.3 Middle school. It is located at Xinqing. It is really like a garden. There are beautiful flowers, green grass and trees. Birds are singing among them.

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? Strategy 1 Using advanced vocabulary

? Strategy 2 Using complex sentence structures ? Strategy 3 Using transitional words

一) Avoiding repeating

1. My favorite subject is English while my sister’s favorite subject is History. → My favorite subject is English while my sister ____ History _____.

2. Zhou Yi learns English well. She learns Maths