目標5—5.5分的學生,雅思大作文字數控制在200字以上;

篇一：A類5.5分雅思劍橋7Test1大作文

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作文題目：

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents，for instance for sport or music，and others are not。However，it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

學生原文：

Everyone believed that talents is the essential requirement to be successful. However, some famous and successful person always recognize them that they are no any talents but success in the final. So, weather the talents can decide the future is hard to illustrate. And here are my own view.I think that talents is an very important factor to decide the future of a person, because there are lots