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托福寫作批改：[綜合+獨立][TPO19]高分作文推薦

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Question: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how

they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.

Apparently, the speaker disputes the notion illustrated in the reading

material. According to the passage, there are three considerable factors about

harmful effects of buzzing. However, none of them regard in the eye of the

listening material.

Initially, the author contends that with buzzing all information that

consumers hear is incorrect. Actually, the speaker does not agree at all, by

asserting that not all the individuals are paid to tell lies. Of course, they

get money, but what they say is true, whi