作文改寫ppt
篇一:小作文改寫
雅思寫作小作文---第一句這樣改寫
先看看劍7 TEST3的題目:
The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
再來看給出的6.5分范文
This chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houses in 1989.
出路倒是有一條,那就是“句型變化+詞匯改變”,措辭改變大傢很好理解,句型變化是大傢以前很少想到去做的,其實句型變化很簡單,一般題目The table shows後面給出的通常是一個名詞性的詞組,我們把它改成句子即可,句型和詞匯雙變化,改寫就容易充分瞭:
The given diagram indicates that how the real estate market in five major cities around the world changed from 1989 to the period between 1990 and 2002.
句型變化:名詞性詞組changes變為how…changed…
詞匯變化:this chart變為t




